LET'S JUST GET TO THE POINT

The Paramedic method of writing, orginally developed by Richard Lanthan in Revising Prose is now used to edit any kind of professional writing. It is used to make your writing a more consistent and clear writing in order for it to be easier to comprehend.

In regards to our assignment of finding or writng the "longest sentence", there are so many in which to choose from that the sentence I am using is by no means the longest.

The paramedic method, or to say more with less, is a method that takes work and practice as well as a lot of thought.

Used by a collection agency the sentence read

We use a professional collection agency whose expertise has proven successful in the recovery process because we believe that a specialized approach and focus for recovering from insured individuals are the most effective.

My revised sentence
 
 We have found that collection experts do the best job of recovering money from uninsured individuals.

As we are just learning this method it is a lot easier for us to write words that come to mind and in sometimes we feel that we just need to put something down in order to get the word count required.  That effect is useless if the writing is jargon that really makes no sense to us as students and is not helping us to learn the methods.